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Be absolutely
honest.
Don't overstate accomplishments, claim credit for what should
be shared, imply something other than the truth, nor propose
a graduate study plan or ambitions only for the Truman competition. |
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Be yourself.
In a "blind reading" (e.g., your name removed)
of your application with other good applications, your family
and your teachers would identify you. The set of responses
to these items ought to be one that only you can write. |
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Make it interesting.
Consider having an approach that introduces some pertinent
unusual features of you or your experiences to reveal your
unique individuality and to help distinguish you from the
other candidates. |
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Avoid undue repetition.
Don't make the personal statement a narrative description
of all of your activities previously identified in Items
2-4. Highlight the most important. |
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Answer the questions
concretely and specifically.
Except for Item 15, you should have precise, well-focused
answers responsive to the Item. Depth is better than breadth. |
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Engage the reader
quickly.
Have intriguing or compelling opening and closing sentences
in your narrative responses to Items 7, 8, and 15. |
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Be current.
If you cite statistics or political developments or provocative
writings, they should be up to date. Be careful about examples
from high school days or early childhood. |
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Understand the goal
of the personal statement.
The main goal of the written material is to get an invitation
to the interview and to present some lines of questioning.
An outstanding personal statement won't win a Truman Scholarship
for you... but a poorly prepared one will deny you the chance
to interview for the scholarship. |
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Maintain a sharp
focus.
Have precise responses to each item. Don't try to share
every interest, every societal concern, every accomplishment,
every ambition, every passion. |
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Maintain a degree
of modesty, especially in Item 15.
Hold down the use of "I". If you have had a rare
accomplishment (e.g., member of a National team, winner
or high finisher in a national competition, board for an
international organization), share it. Be careful in trumpeting
high school accomplishments -- many Truman Scholar candidates
have been high school class presidents, varsity athletes,
debate champions and the like. |
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Be realistic in
Items 13 and 14.
Be bold but not unrealistically ambitious. |
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Reveal your motivations
for a career in public service. |
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Avoid repeating
experiences.
Use different examples for your responses to Items 7, 8,
9, and 15 if possible. Let the Finalists Selection Committee
members see your various dimensions. |
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Dealing with major
challenges.
If discrimination, poverty, family breakdown, severe illness
or another problem beyond your control has been a major
factor in your development and the establishment of your
ambitions, write about it. Avoid playing for sympathy. Truman
Scholars are selected on the basis of accomplishment --
not endurance. |
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Explain "understandable"
gaps or weaknesses.
If you had a serious illness or unusually heavy family obligations
that temporarily affected your grades or limited your participation
in public service, please share it (or have your Faculty
Representative bring it out). |